Johnathan Seers WIP
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Johnathan Seers WIP
SERVICE INFORMATION
Photo Identification:
Name: Johnathan Seers
Rank: (Ima hoping for Cpl or LCpl)
MOS: Infantry-Quartermaster
Billet:
Years of Service: 10
PERSONAL INFORMATION
Age: 29
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 130
Personality: The personality of your character.
History: The history from childhood to present of your character (please be detailed as this is supposed to be written much like a biography).
MEDICAL INFORMATION
Eye Color: Amberish
Hair Color: White
Medical Conditions: Allergic to Penicillin, Amoxicillin, and derivatives of the two.
Wounds: A large scar running from the bottom of his throat to the top of his groin.
SUPPLY INFORMATION
Weapons: What weapons does your character use?
M4 Carbine
M67 Fragmentation Grenade x2
M18 Smoke Grenade x2
M84 Stun (Flashbang) Grenade x2
*if fire-team leader*
Mounted M203 Grenade Launcher
--40mm Grenades x2
Equipment: What kind of equipment does your Marine have?
SAMPLE ROLE-PLAY
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Player Name: Johnathan Seers
Player E-Mail:Will be PMed to lead admin.
Recruiter: Good ol Marine. You know him as Hobber.
Photo Identification:
Name: Johnathan Seers
Rank: (Ima hoping for Cpl or LCpl)
MOS: Infantry-Quartermaster
Billet:
Years of Service: 10
PERSONAL INFORMATION
Age: 29
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 130
Personality: The personality of your character.
History: The history from childhood to present of your character (please be detailed as this is supposed to be written much like a biography).
MEDICAL INFORMATION
Eye Color: Amberish
Hair Color: White
Medical Conditions: Allergic to Penicillin, Amoxicillin, and derivatives of the two.
Wounds: A large scar running from the bottom of his throat to the top of his groin.
SUPPLY INFORMATION
Weapons: What weapons does your character use?
M4 Carbine
M67 Fragmentation Grenade x2
M18 Smoke Grenade x2
M84 Stun (Flashbang) Grenade x2
*if fire-team leader*
Mounted M203 Grenade Launcher
--40mm Grenades x2
Equipment: What kind of equipment does your Marine have?
SAMPLE ROLE-PLAY
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Player Name: Johnathan Seers
Player E-Mail:Will be PMed to lead admin.
Recruiter: Good ol Marine. You know him as Hobber.
Last edited by Johnathan Seers on Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:49 am; edited 1 time in total
Johnathan Seers- Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-04-24
Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
before you get set on 10 years service, that's quite a bit for a lcpl or even cpl. Reduce that number down to maybe 2 or 3. And my name is HobbAr
Michael Hobbar- Admin
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Age : 30
Location : Infront of a Computer
Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
I may knock it down, matters on how much history I write...
and whatever you say HobbOR...
and whatever you say HobbOR...
Johnathan Seers- Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-04-24
Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
Firstly I'd like to jump in a say this application needs a great deal of work for it to pass muster. You need to write down the personality and biography (although I noticed you said you're writing that part) of the character, as well as copy and paste the equipment list from the Armory into the equipment section. Finally, Quartermaster is not one of our available MOS nor is it an actual MOS, as I am aware of. The closest thing you could get is an Admin Marine. However, we are in charge of the final say in your MOS so leave that as is, but your Sample Role-Play will have to change to something more... combat oriented.
Make the alterations requested and you'll be good to go, bud. Happy editing!
Make the alterations requested and you'll be good to go, bud. Happy editing!
Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
Ok I will change the Sample. So what would his MOS be if I was wanting him to be some sort of quartermaster? Mainly because i want to do other things than just kill kill kill...
Johnathan Seers- Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-04-24
Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
logistics would be closer in my opinion.Michael Garber wrote:Firstly I'd like to jump in a say this application needs a great deal of work for it to pass muster. You need to write down the personality and biography (although I noticed you said you're writing that part) of the character, as well as copy and paste the equipment list from the Armory into the equipment section. Finally, Quartermaster is not one of our available MOS nor is it an actual MOS, as I am aware of. The closest thing you could get is an Admin Marine. However, we are in charge of the final say in your MOS so leave that as is, but your Sample Role-Play will have to change to something more... combat oriented.
Make the alterations requested and you'll be good to go, bud. Happy editing!
Michael Hobbar- Admin
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Join date : 2010-04-09
Age : 30
Location : Infront of a Computer
Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
So for what I'm shooting for, what should i have his experience be?
And is it OK if he has had some affiliation with street gangs at one point of time, but was never caught. (A very little amount, and the Marines was a way out.)
And is it OK if he has had some affiliation with street gangs at one point of time, but was never caught. (A very little amount, and the Marines was a way out.)
Johnathan Seers- Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-04-24
Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
yeah thats fine.Johnathan Seers wrote:So for what I'm shooting for, what should i have his experience be?
And is it OK if he has had some affiliation with street gangs at one point of time, but was never caught. (A very little amount, and the Marines was a way out.)
Michael Hobbar- Admin
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Age : 30
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Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
And the other one? How many years should he have then?
Johnathan Seers- Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-04-24
Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
what do you mean by the other one?Johnathan Seers wrote:And the other one? How many years should he have then?
Years of Service should be like 0-3ish years depending on how old you want your character to be.
Michael Hobbar- Admin
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Join date : 2010-04-09
Age : 30
Location : Infront of a Computer
Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
There is no other MOS at the moment that he can be that is along the lines of admin. He's a grunt. Plain and simple. Unless you want to be a Navy Corpsman (since you said you want to do more than kill), as they are trained to heal the Marines in the field while killing just as many enemies as the grunts. And that would be good as we need a Devil Doc as it is.
And as Hobbar said, as long as he was never caught by the authorities, he can have had some gang activity in his past.
And as Hobbar said, as long as he was never caught by the authorities, he can have had some gang activity in his past.
Re: Johnathan Seers WIP
Alright, so i may show up sometime to finish this, but don't wait up for me, it may be months.
Johnathan Seers- Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-04-24
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